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Tuesday, August 18th, 2009
My breakfast was two slices of toast like British style this morning.
I went down later than usual and went to the head office to attend the general meeting of stock holders.
The meeting is simple ritual, but the executives are given the rewards after the meeting.
All of attendants of it had a long lunch in the Italian restaurant.
I returned home earlier than usual since I had nothing to do after that.
My dinner was the Chinese food, today's meals were international.
Tuesday, August 18th, 2009
My breakfast was two slices of British-style toast this morning.
(When describing some thing as being in the style of something else, it usually goes before, ex. "Japanese-style tea ceremony")
I went down later than usual and headed to the office to attend a general meeting of stock holders.
(Since the sentence is in past tense, "head" needs to be conjugated as well. You use "a" rather than "the" here because to the reader wasn't involved [most likely] and wouldn't know what specific meeting you're talking about. Also, did you mean you "left later than usual"? Or "went to breakfast" later than usual? I wasn't sure, so I left it the same, but it's kind of vague.)
The meeting is a simple process, but the executives are given rewards afterward.
("Ritual" implies some kind of fancy, almost religious ceremony. We'd say something like "process" here. "Rewards" doesn't need an article in this case. Repeating "the meeting" at the end is unnecessarily repetitive.)
All of the attendants had a long lunch in an Italian restaurant.
("Of it" is a bit repetitive because we know what you're talking about already. Once again, "a" instead of "the" because the reader doesn't know about the restaurant. It's just a generic place to them.)
I returned earlier than usual since I had nothing to do after that.
(This sentence is perfect! ^_^)
My dinner was Chinese food; today's meals were international.
(You don't need an article before "Chinese". When combining two complete but related sentences, you use a semicolon rather than a comma.)
Hope that helps :] Sorry if my explanations of articles are weird; they're so natural that it's very hard to explain.
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